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A cold breeze cuts
through my woolen cap . . .
I can’t go home.



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Edison99This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
today at 4:39 pm:
i like how the poem shows the perserverance of the character and how he still goes on eventhough he faced a setback. Constructive criticism: change "can't" to won't. It seems as if the breeze is somehow stopping him from going back. overall, really amazing poem!
 
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