the windy trail

June 10, 2013
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A cold breeze cuts
through my woolen cap . . .
I can’t go home.

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Edison99 said...
Jun. 27, 2013 at 4:39 pm
i like how the poem shows the perserverance of the character and how he still goes on eventhough he faced a setback. Constructive criticism: change "can't" to won't. It seems as if the breeze is somehow stopping him from going back. overall, really amazing poem!
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