Report Abuse Home > Poetry > Haiku > the windy trail the windy trail By bengaltiger, seymour,mo, MO More by this author through my woolen cap . . . I can’t go home. « Previous article More by this author Next article » Join the Discussion This article has 1 comment. Post your own! Report abuse Edison99 said... Jun. 27, 2013 at 4:39 pm: i like how the poem shows the perserverance of the character and how he still goes on eventhough he faced a setback. Constructive criticism: change "can't" to won't. It seems as if the breeze is somehow stopping him from going back. overall, really amazing poem!