Report Abuse Home > Poetry > Haiku > death among the snows death among the snows By juneday, Barrington, RI More by this author Heavy step; under the snow, Small voices silenced. « Previous article More by this author Next article » Join the Discussion This article has 2 comments. Post your own! Report abuse naolovesbooks said... Jun. 26, 2013 at 8:10 pm: Well done! It manages to be descriptive in only a few words! I thought that "under the snow, small voices silenced" is really good, but not enough. I think you should embellish the title more! You would do it very well! juneday replied... Jun. 27, 2013 at 4:34 pm : Thanks so much for your feedback! Unfortunately, I think it would be hard to change the content, due to the rigid meter of the haiku. I like your suggestion about the title!