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You placed them on his
nightstand, but he knocked them down;
hyacinths don’t weep.




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TheSkyOwesMeRainThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jun. 5 at 12:30 am:
I love this! Great imagery especially :)
 
MckayThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jun. 5 at 1:04 pm :
Thanks. By the way, long time no see. 
 
TheSkyOwesMeRainThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jun. 5 at 6:09 pm :
Yeah, I've been away for a while :P
 
MckayThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
today at 2:28 pm :
Well, good to have you back. ^u^
 
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demingfischer said...
Jun. 3 at 11:56 am:
I really like the way you used the line breaks in this poem to keep with the whole 5-7-5 thing.
 
MckayThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jun. 3 at 2:33 pm :
Thank you very much, demingfischer. 
 
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