Airplane This work is considered exceptional by our editorial staff.

May 1, 2013
Dissecting the clouds,
The white monstrosity madly
Swerves near the sky's orb.





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Kenzico This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 30, 2013 at 1:30 pm
creative, i like it.
 
Krasota This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jul. 30, 2013 at 3:23 pm
Thank you! :P
 
Mckay This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 6, 2013 at 1:41 pm
This is simply what haiku should be. I love how you captured the essence or the perpective of an airplane flying in the heavens. Very creative. And most of all very lovely. This is a 5 star haiku.
 
Krasota This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
May 6, 2013 at 2:49 pm
Thank you so much! I really appreciate that. ^_^
 
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