Rose, O Rose, O Rose

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You blush as if some
lover passionately French
kissed your silky lips.





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SongBird04 said...
Jun. 2, 2013 at 10:00 pm
this made me smile! haha...i don't really know what to think. It's very short and simple, but sweet, too. 
 
Mckay This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jun. 3, 2013 at 1:29 pm
If it made you smile, then I accomplished more than what I wanted. Thank you. Your feedback is very sweet. 
 
SaphiraBrightscales This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 29, 2013 at 5:08 am
Simple. Beautiful. Awesome. Can't. Think. Of. Any. Better. Way. To. Put. It. I. Love. This. And. Don't. Have. Any. Idea. Why. I'm. Writing. Like. This. This. Haiku. Is. Quite. Something. Have. A. Great. Day. Pal.
 
Mckay This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jun. 3, 2013 at 1:28 pm
THANK. YOU. SO. MUCH. SAPHIRABRIGHTSCALES. Have. a. nice. day. as. well. hope. you're. feeling. great. 
 
SaphiraBrightscales This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jun. 13, 2013 at 2:43 am
Well, now I am :D
 
Metal4Life said...
May 20, 2013 at 9:32 pm
This is simply amazing! Roses are my favorite flower! :) it makes me blush thinking of it!
 
Mckay This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
May 22, 2013 at 4:02 pm
I love them as well. Thanks for commenting.
 
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