Ocean

April 13, 2013
By steelsoprano DIAMOND, Cincinnati, Ohio
steelsoprano DIAMOND, Cincinnati, Ohio
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Drops of salt hit my
Face, the cool wind making goose
Bumps on my bare skin.



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Mckay ELITE said...
on Sep. 4 2013 at 5:07 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do."
—Apple’s “Think Different” commercial, 1997
“Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn't understood.”
― Weihui Zhou

You're a ninja with haikus. And that was a pun with your name. But I've said it before to other nija-haikuers. 

on Apr. 18 2013 at 8:27 pm
StarGazer9 GOLD, Marana, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
"Never let the odds keep you from doing what you know in your heart you were meant to do."

Normally I'm not a fan of haikus, but i enjoyed this one :) Good job. 

on Apr. 18 2013 at 8:18 pm
steelsoprano DIAMOND, Cincinnati, Ohio
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How would I make it better? Honestly, not trying to be sarcastic.

nikkiluvzu said...
on Apr. 18 2013 at 3:48 pm
nikkiluvzu, New Hope, Minnesota
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ok-ish i liked it but a little bland  

on Apr. 18 2013 at 1:31 pm
RichardPHSReed BRONZE, Hampton, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
Can we live Without music?

Pretty good

on Apr. 18 2013 at 9:26 am
that was an amazing poem.


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