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Drops of salt hit my
Face, the cool wind making goose
Bumps on my bare skin.



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MckayThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 4, 2013 at 5:07 pm:
You're a ninja with haikus. And that was a pun with your name. But I've said it before to other nija-haikuers. 
 
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StarGazer9This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 18, 2013 at 8:27 pm:
Normally I'm not a fan of haikus, but i enjoyed this one :) Good job. 
 
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nikkiluvzu said...
Apr. 18, 2013 at 3:48 pm:
ok-ish i liked it but a little bland  
 
SilentNinjaThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Apr. 18, 2013 at 8:18 pm :
How would I make it better? Honestly, not trying to be sarcastic.
 
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RichardPHSReed said...
Apr. 18, 2013 at 1:31 pm:
Pretty good
 
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Alicia_smit18 said...
Apr. 18, 2013 at 9:26 am:
that was an amazing poem.
 
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