Report Abuse Home > Poetry > Haiku > Ocean Ocean By _firaffe_, Cincinnati, OH More by this author Face, the cool wind making goose Bumps on my bare skin. « Previous article More by this author Next article » November & December Join the Discussion This article has 6 comments. Post your own! Report abuse Mckay said... today at 5:07 pm: You're a ninja with haikus. And that was a pun with your name. But I've said it before to other nija-haikuers. Report abuse StarGazer9 said... Apr. 18 at 8:27 pm: Normally I'm not a fan of haikus, but i enjoyed this one :) Good job. Report abuse nikkiluvzu said... Apr. 18 at 3:48 pm: ok-ish i liked it but a little bland SilentNinja replied... Apr. 18 at 8:18 pm : How would I make it better? Honestly, not trying to be sarcastic. Report abuse RichardPHSReed said... Apr. 18 at 1:31 pm: Pretty good Report abuse Alicia_smit18 said... Apr. 18 at 9:26 am: that was an amazing poem.