Report Abuse Home > Poetry > Haiku > The clock that doesn't make a sound The clock that doesn't make a sound By laurengerhard, South Windsor, CT More by this author His heart like a broken clock: tick, tock, tick, tock – gone. « Previous article More by this author Next article » Join the Discussion This article has 10 comments. Post your own! Report abuse Hanban12 said... May 13, 2013 at 6:27 pm: OMG! I loved this!! Ok, I know it was super short, but i absolutely loved its meaning and metaphor. I loved, loved, loved this poem! Keep writing! laurengerhard replied... May 14, 2013 at 4:01 pm : Thank you so much! Report abuse laurengerhard said... Apr. 27, 2013 at 7:01 pm: Okay, done. Xo Report abuse swat17 said... Apr. 25, 2013 at 7:35 am: Wow, great emotion! One of the best haikus I've read in a while. Nice job! laurengerhard replied... Apr. 26, 2013 at 4:31 pm : Thank you! swat17 replied... Apr. 26, 2013 at 6:14 pm : By the way, would you mind reason and commenting on my piece titled "Stacy Hallmark, English, Louisa County High School"? Thanks! Report abuse Mckay said... Apr. 19, 2013 at 1:59 pm: I like the candidness of this haiku. It's straight to the point and brimmed with heart-braking emotion. laurengerhard replied... Apr. 21, 2013 at 8:18 pm : Thank you. X Report abuse TheEpic95 said... Apr. 18, 2013 at 6:03 pm: Sad..... I dont know what to say. laurengerhard replied... Apr. 18, 2013 at 10:21 pm : It is, it is, it is.