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April 10, 2013
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One more promise drips
Down your lips, falls and splashes
My face like wet mud.

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SaphiraBrightscales This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 27, 2013 at 2:10 am
That was just WOW! Absolutely deserved the editor's choice... The imagery painted such a picture! So intense... Very well done Haiku!
LiraDaeris said...
Apr. 18, 2013 at 12:36 am
After reading this, I literally said, "Ooo that was cool :D" Good job on this one. Good imagery, good flow, all of it was simply goodness :D
mjune said...
Apr. 18, 2013 at 12:25 am
i reallllly like this :)  
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