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One more promise drips
Down your lips, falls and splashes
My face like wet mud.



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SaphiraBrightscales said...
Apr. 27, 2013 at 2:10 am:
That was just WOW! Absolutely deserved the editor's choice... The imagery painted such a picture! So intense... Very well done Haiku!
 
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LiraDaeris said...
Apr. 18, 2013 at 12:36 am:
After reading this, I literally said, "Ooo that was cool :D" Good job on this one. Good imagery, good flow, all of it was simply goodness :D
 
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mjune said...
Apr. 18, 2013 at 12:25 am:
i reallllly like this :)  
 
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