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March 15, 2013
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So adrenaline
Holds your brain hostage. You slit.
End of the story.





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graceh22 said...
Mar. 31, 2013 at 2:13 pm
this was amazing. 
 
AugustSummerFling This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Apr. 6, 2013 at 3:45 am
Thank you :)
 
EMarie This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 31, 2013 at 3:42 am
I really liked this. It had a story to it, with a limited amount of syllables. And it made sense as well. Great job and keep writing!
 
AugustSummerFling This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Mar. 31, 2013 at 3:45 am
Thank you :)
 
LariElaine said...
Mar. 31, 2013 at 3:40 am
It seems REALLY awesome,  i also like how it's 5,7,5 (just how a haiku should be)
 
AugustSummerFling This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Mar. 31, 2013 at 3:41 am
thanks larie :)
 
Dunes said...
Mar. 30, 2013 at 4:08 pm
I like that it makes sense, AND fits the requirements.
 
AugustSummerFling This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Mar. 31, 2013 at 3:36 am
glad you liked it :)
 
BorderlineGenius777 said...
Mar. 29, 2013 at 8:53 pm
Rarely can truth be brought this hard in so few words. Wonderful. If I may ask you, please comment and rate my story "The Paradox". Its a bit long but A lot of work went into it.
 
AugustSummerFling This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Mar. 31, 2013 at 3:36 am
thank you :) n yes, I have commented on your story :) It was cool!!
 
m.o.n.k.a.y said...
Mar. 29, 2013 at 10:08 am
true  
 
Irenie This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 28, 2013 at 10:57 pm
Very short, but so true. Having thought of suicide many times, I can truly relate to this poem. This haiku is amazing because it takes very complex ideas and simplifies them. Keep writing!
 
AugustSummerFling This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Mar. 31, 2013 at 3:35 am
Thank u :) I always believe that tomorrow will always be better no matter how bad things are now.. :) Hope more people start thinking the same way :)
 
necci said...
Mar. 28, 2013 at 9:52 am
ouch that actually hurts, although its very true
 
AugustSummerFling This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Mar. 31, 2013 at 3:34 am
so many people just end their lives after losing hope... That there's nothing better in life.. It's just very sad :( 
 
ForeverMystery said...
Mar. 28, 2013 at 6:47 am
Awesome work. Keep it up!
 
AugustSummerFling This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Mar. 28, 2013 at 6:49 am
Thanks :) .
 
Fallenoutofgrace said...
Mar. 28, 2013 at 6:41 am
That's really sad but really good it contradicts my emotions right now good job
 
AugustSummerFling This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Mar. 28, 2013 at 6:43 am
Thank you :)
 
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