Suicide Story

March 15, 2013
By AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
36 articles 0 photos 265 comments

Favorite Quote:
'For you, a thousand times over.' - Hassan, The Kite Runner

A professional writer is an amateur who didn't quit.


So adrenaline
Holds your brain hostage. You slit.
End of the story.


The author's comments:
Somebody said - 'don't do anything stupid and permanent for something that is temporary'
Very true.

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on Mar. 31 2013 at 2:13 pm
graceh22 BRONZE, Cincinnati, Ohio
2 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Chance is always powerful. Let your hook be always cast in the pool where you least expect it; there will be a fish."

this was amazing. 

on Mar. 31 2013 at 3:45 am
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
36 articles 0 photos 265 comments

Favorite Quote:
'For you, a thousand times over.' - Hassan, The Kite Runner

A professional writer is an amateur who didn't quit.

Thank you :)

EMarie GOLD said...
on Mar. 31 2013 at 3:42 am
EMarie GOLD, Joplin, Missouri
19 articles 7 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
Courage comes in all sizes, but fits only a few.
What is wise is not always right and what is right is not always wise.
Knowing what is wrong and right is not choosing which to fight.
-All of these are by me

I really liked this. It had a story to it, with a limited amount of syllables. And it made sense as well. Great job and keep writing!

on Mar. 31 2013 at 3:41 am
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
36 articles 0 photos 265 comments

Favorite Quote:
'For you, a thousand times over.' - Hassan, The Kite Runner

A professional writer is an amateur who didn't quit.

thanks larie :)

on Mar. 31 2013 at 3:40 am
larissaecm SILVER, Victoria, Other
7 articles 0 photos 44 comments
It seems REALLY awesome,  i also like how it's 5,7,5 (just how a haiku should be)

on Mar. 31 2013 at 3:36 am
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
36 articles 0 photos 265 comments

Favorite Quote:
'For you, a thousand times over.' - Hassan, The Kite Runner

A professional writer is an amateur who didn't quit.

glad you liked it :)

on Mar. 31 2013 at 3:36 am
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
36 articles 0 photos 265 comments

Favorite Quote:
'For you, a thousand times over.' - Hassan, The Kite Runner

A professional writer is an amateur who didn't quit.

thank you :) n yes, I have commented on your story :) It was cool!!

on Mar. 31 2013 at 3:35 am
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
36 articles 0 photos 265 comments

Favorite Quote:
'For you, a thousand times over.' - Hassan, The Kite Runner

A professional writer is an amateur who didn't quit.

Thank u :) I always believe that tomorrow will always be better no matter how bad things are now.. :) Hope more people start thinking the same way :)

on Mar. 31 2013 at 3:34 am
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
36 articles 0 photos 265 comments

Favorite Quote:
'For you, a thousand times over.' - Hassan, The Kite Runner

A professional writer is an amateur who didn't quit.

so many people just end their lives after losing hope... That there's nothing better in life.. It's just very sad :( 

Dunes SILVER said...
on Mar. 30 2013 at 4:08 pm
Dunes SILVER, Leander, Texas
5 articles 1 photo 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A room without books is like a body without soul." -Marcus Tullius Cicero

I like that it makes sense, AND fits the requirements.

on Mar. 29 2013 at 8:53 pm
BorderlineGenius777 SILVER, Lewiston, Idaho
7 articles 0 photos 80 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If all our misfortunes were laid in one common heap, whence everyone must take an equal portion, most would be content to take their own and depart."- Socrates

Rarely can truth be brought this hard in so few words. Wonderful. If I may ask you, please comment and rate my story "The Paradox". Its a bit long but A lot of work went into it.

on Mar. 29 2013 at 10:08 am
m.o.n.k.a.y BRONZE, Dededo, Other
2 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
Lifes a roller coaster , get ready for the next tunnel.

true  

GreyGirl ELITE said...
on Mar. 28 2013 at 10:57 pm
GreyGirl ELITE, Pohang,Kyungbuk, Other
170 articles 122 photos 392 comments
Very short, but so true. Having thought of suicide many times, I can truly relate to this poem. This haiku is amazing because it takes very complex ideas and simplifies them. Keep writing!

necci SILVER said...
on Mar. 28 2013 at 9:52 am
necci SILVER, Denver, Colorado
8 articles 0 photos 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
-Women are many things to humans, but the one thing they are not is dominated by men.
-If a single act of hate can do so much damage, what can a single act of kindness do?

ouch that actually hurts, although its very true

on Mar. 28 2013 at 6:49 am
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
36 articles 0 photos 265 comments

Favorite Quote:
'For you, a thousand times over.' - Hassan, The Kite Runner

A professional writer is an amateur who didn't quit.

Thanks :) .

on Mar. 28 2013 at 6:47 am
ForeverMystery GOLD, Toronto, Other
11 articles 0 photos 56 comments

Favorite Quote:
“I’ve learned that people will forget what you said, people will forget what you did, but people will never forget how you made them feel.”

Awesome work. Keep it up!

on Mar. 28 2013 at 6:43 am
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
36 articles 0 photos 265 comments

Favorite Quote:
'For you, a thousand times over.' - Hassan, The Kite Runner

A professional writer is an amateur who didn't quit.

Thank you :)

on Mar. 28 2013 at 6:41 am
Fallen_ PLATINUM, Quakertown, Pennsylvania
25 articles 3 photos 436 comments

Favorite Quote:
" a shattered world is only an opening into a new beginning with laughs, smiles, and love all around enter the world of the light and away from the broken darkness"

That's really sad but really good it contradicts my emotions right now good job




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