Suicide Story

March 15, 2013
By AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
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Favorite Quote:
'For you, a thousand times over.' - Hassan, The Kite Runner

A professional writer is an amateur who didn't quit.


So adrenaline
Holds your brain hostage. You slit.
End of the story.


The author's comments:
Somebody said - 'don't do anything stupid and permanent for something that is temporary'
Very true.

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on Apr. 7 2013 at 10:14 am
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
36 articles 0 photos 265 comments

Favorite Quote:
'For you, a thousand times over.' - Hassan, The Kite Runner

A professional writer is an amateur who didn't quit.

Thank you :)

on Apr. 6 2013 at 3:46 am
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
36 articles 0 photos 265 comments

Favorite Quote:
'For you, a thousand times over.' - Hassan, The Kite Runner

A professional writer is an amateur who didn't quit.

Thanks, Hamza :) teach you?? You're a really good poet :) just read few haikus and then start practicing :)

on Apr. 6 2013 at 3:45 am
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
36 articles 0 photos 265 comments

Favorite Quote:
'For you, a thousand times over.' - Hassan, The Kite Runner

A professional writer is an amateur who didn't quit.

Thank you :)

on Apr. 6 2013 at 3:45 am
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
36 articles 0 photos 265 comments

Favorite Quote:
'For you, a thousand times over.' - Hassan, The Kite Runner

A professional writer is an amateur who didn't quit.

Thank you :)

on Apr. 5 2013 at 11:55 pm
Laugh-it-Out PLATINUM, Brooklyn, New York, New York
38 articles 0 photos 445 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Do not go gentle into that good night. Rage, rage against the dying of the light" --Dylan Thomas

Simple. Poignant. Pure. Wow. Never. Stop. Writing. Keep. Rocking. And. Always. Laugh.

on Apr. 5 2013 at 8:17 pm
StarlitSunrise DIAMOND, Clemmons, North Carolina
56 articles 0 photos 253 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Blessed are they who see beautiful things in humble places where other people see nothing." ~Camille Pissarro

  I really enjoyed reading this, although it is very dismal. The fact that it is so short contributed to its potency. You are one of the few people who can say so much in a haiku. Great work!

JRaye PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 5 2013 at 3:36 pm
JRaye PLATINUM, Dorr, Michigan
43 articles 10 photos 527 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you build your house far enough away from Trouble, then Trouble will never find you."

"Have you ever looked fear in the face and said, 'I just don't care.'?"

Short and to the point. This is the best haiku ever :) Keep writting! :)

on Apr. 5 2013 at 3:16 pm
paleteenager PLATINUM, Fountain Hills, Arizona
39 articles 0 photos 39 comments
Wow I didn't even realize this was a haiku until I looked at the comments. In that case, it's brilliant! I love how much you said with only seventeen syllables.

on Apr. 5 2013 at 2:10 pm
laurengerhard SILVER, South Windsor, Connecticut
8 articles 0 photos 124 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I am gone quite mad with the knowledge of accepting the overwhelming number of things I can never know, places I can never go, and people I can never be." -Sylvia Plath

This is great for it being so short. You're a talented haiku writer.

on Apr. 5 2013 at 1:00 pm
MissExploration BRONZE, Vancouver, Washington
1 article 0 photos 112 comments

Favorite Quote:
It Can Only Fly When It Needs To.

This is a great Haiku! 

on Apr. 5 2013 at 8:25 am
readaholic PLATINUM, Tomahawk, Wisconsin
27 articles 0 photos 426 comments

Favorite Quote:
I'd rather fail because I fell on my own face than fall because someone tripped me up
~Jhonen Vasquez

I didn't realize it has a haiku at first, but you make very good use of the few syllables you're allowed.  Even though it's short, it's very, very good.  You capture those feelings perfectly!!!

mnm08 BRONZE said...
on Apr. 3 2013 at 1:04 pm
mnm08 BRONZE, Grande Prairie, Texas
2 articles 0 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A writer needs the industry of an ant, the creativity of a kitten and the hid of an armadillo."- Author Unknown

What I love the most is the enjambment in this Haiku. It's striking and to the point . Great job = )

on Apr. 3 2013 at 12:33 pm
SaphiraBrightscales DIAMOND, Islamabad, Other
75 articles 16 photos 1143 comments

Favorite Quote:
I've learned that people will forget what you said, people will forget what you did, but people will never forget how you made them feel.
- Maya Angelou
When i was little/I used to point a chubby finger toward the dark sky/And ask my father/why some stars moved and others didn’t/He would laugh and explain that some were airplanes/I still wish on them today ~ Laugh-It-Out
The feathers of a crow are black/The ink of my pen is blacker/The pain of my heart is blackest~ Mckay
If love produced a blossom/I’d take it in my palm/What a blessing, the bright color!/How soothing, such a balm!/I’d keep a petal for my own/The rest, drop from my hands/For such a flower would multiply/And populate the lands~ thesilentraven
And I began to rival legends/Long entombed before my birth./But for all my much envied fame/The lust for more would not abate./The plaques and prizes with my name/Will, like all things, disintegrate. ~ TheEpic95 now known as Helena_Noel

WOW. Now that is one amazing Haiku. I love the way you put it. The being word and syllable bound, makes it all the more penetrating and thought-provoking. Just Amazing. Now I want to read other stuff of yours!

wordtea GOLD said...
on Apr. 3 2013 at 5:01 am
wordtea GOLD, Delhi, Other
14 articles 0 photos 46 comments

Favorite Quote:
'All men shall die.'- A Clash of Kings
'We accept the love we think we deserve.'- The Perks of Being a Wallflower
'Sometimes people are beautiful. Not in looks. Not in what they say. Just in what they are.'- The Book Thief

It's amazing!

on Apr. 2 2013 at 4:16 pm
Starstruck_001, Great Neck, New York
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Hi!!
I'm new to this whole teen ink thing so I really would like it for people to rate and read my stuff please!! TeenInk.com/novels/sci_fi_fantasy/book/113077/The-Boy-who-Couldnt-Remember/ Ur poem was really good and unique. I really liked it

on Apr. 2 2013 at 11:06 am
RakshaWillow SILVER, Watkinsvile, Georgia
5 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We have nothing to fear but fear itself."

It's a powerful poem due to being so short. Well done. It's one of those poems that you start readibng and then it ends and you're like "well darn now i want more".

on Apr. 2 2013 at 12:07 am
LexusMarie PLATINUM, Las Cruces, New Mexico
27 articles 0 photos 423 comments

Favorite Quote:
The more control you have over yourself, the less control others have over you.

I always read this and it always makes me think! It's good.. great job!

on Apr. 1 2013 at 9:27 pm
Sparkle1pops PLATINUM, Colorado Springs, Colorado
31 articles 20 photos 343 comments

Favorite Quote:
"No great artist ever sees things as they really are. If he did, he would cease to be an artist."
- Oscar Wilde

very nice :) This is very to the point, I like that...well its a haiku so I guess it HAS to be brief but still, I like your decisive word choice. 

on Apr. 1 2013 at 6:14 am
Hamzawaseem GOLD, Lahore, Other
15 articles 1 photo 144 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The important thing is not to stop questioning." ~Einstein

Congrats on getting the edi's choice! Can you teach me how to write haikus?

on Mar. 31 2013 at 11:20 pm
SunnyDreams BRONZE, Niger Falls, Other
1 article 0 photos 274 comments

Favorite Quote:
Can you feel what I have seen, when no one else has lived through what I have?-HalveOfLife

nice jod i wish i could write simple and still get a point accross




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