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Long lasting

March 5, 2013
By Ingolden BRONZE, Vilnius, Other
Ingolden BRONZE, Vilnius, Other
2 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words."


Free me from this world
Be my guiding light out here
Save, keep away and love


The author's comments:
I was inspired by Muse song "explorers". I don't know why, but that melody encourage me to write. I feel supreme music going through my body and filling something empty.

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on Aug. 5 2013 at 2:54 pm
CatchAFallingStar PLATINUM, Pearland, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"If you love something, let it go. If it comes back to you, it's yours, if it doesn't, it never was." - Unknown

Nice job :) I don't normally read haikus, but you commented on my poem so I thought I should return the favor and give you some feedback. I'm not a haiku expert, but personally, I really like this. Usually when I would read haikus in English class or something, they would always paint a picture in my head. This one did as well, so I'd say you did a pretty good job :) Do you write any other type of poetry?