Like Fish This work is considered exceptional by our editorial staff.

The fish are mere words
I, the fishermen, hold the net,
poetry, and cast.





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Mckay This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 16, 2014 at 9:06 pm
Defitnitely on my list of best haikus on TeenInk. There aren't that many on that list. But this took one read to make it one there. I adore it 1000000000000000000000000000000000000%. You've got a knack, nope; talent for haikus; don't stop. You're too fabulous of a writer. 
 
ramfthomas4 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 3, 2013 at 5:56 pm
exactly what i feel like when i write!  thanks for sharing that with us.
 
MaybeImCrazyButIThinkILovedYou This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 21, 2013 at 10:56 pm
Brilliant job!
 
SaphiraBrightscales This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 5, 2013 at 10:31 pm
WOw! Just wow. That is so simply stunning! Awesome metaphors. New and unheard-of!
 
TheSkyOwesMeRain This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 5, 2013 at 12:52 am
Great job! I never would have thought of this! 
 
Swimmer1212 said...
Mar. 4, 2013 at 4:34 pm
I like your word choice. However, I think there might be eight syllables insted of seven in line two. I like the topic though.
 
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