February 5, 2013
You're just like the sky,
my love, whatever you feel,
you show. You're brave.

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KnitsandPurls said...
Feb. 16, 2013 at 10:32 am
Wonderful! This is metaphor I would never thought of, but it makes sense. I enjoy the "my love", it adds detail the reader would not otherwise have been aware of. I really enjoyed reading this poem.   P.S. I have a haiku posted called "Fluent in dance". If you felt compelled to check it out, great. No pressure. :)
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