Once upon a time
there lived a gorgeous rhyme
with the birds she’d chime
there lived a gorgeous rhyme
with the birds she’d chime
Irenie
Great! I like that it's a haiku that rhymes. There are few of them. But it is consistent with the theme of the rhyming bird :)
Thank you so much for all of your comments!
packerbacker12love it! very nice job!
Thank you so much I will be sure to check out some of your work as well.
redhairCat
Oh I like this one! The nature and song theme is great! Good job!
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