The petals wither
The color sings no more
dripping teardrops fall
The color sings no more
dripping teardrops fall
vaidaspade10
Short, but amazing! I really liked this. I was sad it wasn't longer, but I did truly like it. :) Keep it up, I look forward to reading more of your work. :)
Thanks so much :) If you want to you can read my other Haikuhs. I would be glad to look at your work as well.
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