On the road of life,
My car idles. I wait, and
pray for a green light.
My car idles. I wait, and
pray for a green light.
Felirix
Ghalo1337I agree with rose, great poem just needs a shorter title, something that sticks in your head.
roserain
Lovely metaphor! I really enjoyed this. My only suggestion is to consider a shorter title; haikus embody a minimalist approach to writing, so it might help to keep with that theme. I'm being nitpicky, though. Nice work! :)
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