Figurative Driving, Little Road Experience

January 2, 2013
On the road of life,
My car idles. I wait, and
pray for a green light.

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Felirix said...
Jan. 6, 2013 at 4:15 am
Good job...relatable.
Ghalo1337 said...
Jan. 5, 2013 at 7:15 pm
I agree with rose, great poem just needs a shorter title, something that sticks in your head.
roserain This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 4, 2013 at 10:41 pm
Lovely metaphor! I really enjoyed this. My only suggestion is to consider a shorter title; haikus embody a minimalist approach to writing, so it might help to keep with that theme. I'm being nitpicky, though. Nice work! :)
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