Figurative Driving, Little Road Experience

January 2, 2013
By RachelNarozniak GOLD, Allentown, New Jersey
RachelNarozniak GOLD, Allentown, New Jersey
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On the road of life,
My car idles. I wait, and
pray for a green light.

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Felirix BRONZE said...
on Jan. 6 2013 at 4:15 am
Felirix BRONZE, Bangalore, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Don't Try to teach a pig to sing. It doesn't work, and it annoys the pig.

Good job...relatable.

on Jan. 5 2013 at 7:15 pm
Ghalo1337 SILVER, Brownsmill, New Jersey
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I agree with rose, great poem just needs a shorter title, something that sticks in your head.

byebye said...
on Jan. 4 2013 at 10:41 pm
byebye, Nevermore, Other
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Lovely metaphor! I really enjoyed this. My only suggestion is to consider a shorter title; haikus embody a minimalist approach to writing, so it might help to keep with that theme. I'm being nitpicky, though. Nice work! :)


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