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I watch as they fall
How content they seem to be
Once they kiss the Earth

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.




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theatregirlThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 2, 2013 at 2:37 pm
I like your poem but I only gave 3 star because it so short. The ideas should really be expanded upon
 
AmieDR replied...
Jan. 2, 2013 at 10:43 pm
Thats whats called a haiku.
 
WaffleOcean2934This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 1, 2013 at 6:32 pm
Those are some very nice words!  Love it!
 
ladybugsrock said...
Jan. 1, 2013 at 5:56 pm
I like the word choice you used! Ive never heard anyone describe rain like you did! Excellent! Please read, comment, and rate some of my poems too! I would appreciate it:) thanks
 
CTS207 said...
Jan. 1, 2013 at 1:56 pm
Short and to the point with imagry on top. Very nice
 
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