Haiku- The Beast Within

December 1, 2012
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I pose before you, Revealed
your ravenous eyes
roaming hotly across my
undisguised body
Excited with the thoughts of
what to me you'll do
and how I will respond to
your advance. Touch me
and unleash the beast within

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Something16 said...
Dec. 4, 2012 at 1:38 pm
I dont think it posted my other comment but I love this. Truely one of my favorites from this site. Its adult, mature. "Grown n Sexy" Lol. I think you completed the challenge in a very well done way. AWESOME! Keep writing for me please!
Something16 said...
Dec. 4, 2012 at 1:36 pm
Awesome Job!
Something16 said...
Dec. 4, 2012 at 1:33 pm
I absolutely love this. Its very adult like. Mature. "Grown n Sexy" Well at least thats how I read it. One of my absolute favorites from this site. Only thing I think is you should do something with the form. It looks funny. But its perfect. GREAT Job!
Euterpe replied...
Jan. 16, 2013 at 5:18 pm
Thank you for your stellar comments! Any ideas on the format?
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