Haiku- The Beast Within

December 1, 2012
By Euterpe SILVER, Lancaster, Pennsylvania
Euterpe SILVER, Lancaster, Pennsylvania
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I pose before you, Revealed
your ravenous eyes
roaming hotly across my
undisguised body
Excited with the thoughts of
what to me you'll do
and how I will respond to
your advance. Touch me
and unleash the beast within


The author's comments:
This piece stemmed from a few scattered lines that I could never find a place for in my other works. Finally, one day I gathered up all the random lines and 30 minutes later, I had a general idea of the theme. Haiku's are not my strong suits in poetry; I enjoy the freedom of writing what I want without restraint, but I stepped up the the challenge. What do you think?

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Euterpe SILVER said...
on Jan. 16 2013 at 5:18 pm
Euterpe SILVER, Lancaster, Pennsylvania
8 articles 0 photos 2 comments
Thank you for your stellar comments! Any ideas on the format?

Something16 said...
on Dec. 4 2012 at 1:38 pm
I dont think it posted my other comment but I love this. Truely one of my favorites from this site. Its adult, mature. "Grown n Sexy" Lol. I think you completed the challenge in a very well done way. AWESOME! Keep writing for me please!

Something16 said...
on Dec. 4 2012 at 1:36 pm
Awesome Job!

Something16 said...
on Dec. 4 2012 at 1:33 pm
I absolutely love this. Its very adult like. Mature. "Grown n Sexy" Well at least thats how I read it. One of my absolute favorites from this site. Only thing I think is you should do something with the form. It looks funny. But its perfect. GREAT Job!


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