Report Abuse Home > Poetry > Haiku > Soft Lingering Soft Lingering By asofnow, Troy, MI More by this author Over my new shoes and thoughts Floating around about spring « Previous article More by this author Next article » Join the Discussion This article has 4 comments. Post your own! Report abuse Mckay said... Aug. 16 at 9:04 pm: This will definitely be lingering in my mind for the rest of the evening. I like the last person's suggestion. However, for this poem, I like the fact that it leaves the reader will the thought of "What happens next?" Sometimes, those kind of ending are necessary. Everything can't end with a definite ending, you know. Life is that way. There are always questions. Gotta keep Life full of mysteries and enigmas. 5/5 Report abuse MaybeImCrazyButIThinkILovedYou said... Mar. 21, 2013 at 11:02 pm: You seem to have a knack for writing these haikus... I have an idea. It's just a humble thought, but since you're so good with the simple and profound pieces, try writing in haiku stanzas, expanding slightly, and making these into larger poems! Example (Just going to use yours): Slick grimy snow slushes over my new shoes and thoughts floating around about spring... What happens next? I know that was random, but the thought came to mind and I thought it might ... (more ») asofnow replied... Mar. 22, 2013 at 9:59 am : Thank you so much for your comments. It means a lot to me that you would read into my work so much! I will definitely try that out! Thank you. Report abuse DreamingOutQuiet said... Dec. 12, 2012 at 11:25 pm: What a charming poem. Great imagery and word choice.