You in a Haiku

October 20, 2012
By LinkinPark12 PLATINUM, Lincolnshire, Other
LinkinPark12 PLATINUM, Lincolnshire, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Work like you don’t need money, love like you've never been hurt, and dance like no one's watching. ¦ I like change - but only when everything stays the same.


You in a haiku,
Or from all of my dreams,
Unrealistic.

You; that's what I want,
Out of everyone out there,
Unseen, 'cept from me.

Your eyes, they look wise,
Old, happy, but incomplete,
Unburdened by love.

You'll find me quite soon,
Out under the stars and moon,
Untouched and private.

You won't be hurt by
Our love, I promise, my dear,
Until I leave you.

You will understand,
Our story will be secret,
Untold for decades.

Yet when the end comes,
Our great secrets we shall share,
Unified at last.

You in a haiku,
Or from all of my dreams,
Unknown in the world.


The author's comments:
For all you budding poets, you will notice that "YOU" is written down on the left side of every paragraph.
Reading and understanding this takes a bit of time, and although I've never been in love before, I imagine this is what pure love is like.
Please comment and rate, I want to improve my writing skills.

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on Jan. 21 2013 at 2:00 pm
LinkinPark12 PLATINUM, Lincolnshire, Other
45 articles 1 photo 198 comments

Favorite Quote:
Work like you don’t need money, love like you've never been hurt, and dance like no one's watching. ¦ I like change - but only when everything stays the same.

Cheers (-;

on Jan. 20 2013 at 12:16 pm
LinkinPark12 PLATINUM, Lincolnshire, Other
45 articles 1 photo 198 comments

Favorite Quote:
Work like you don’t need money, love like you've never been hurt, and dance like no one's watching. ¦ I like change - but only when everything stays the same.

Thank youu! :D

on Oct. 26 2012 at 4:33 am
missyEagles BRONZE, Somewhere, Other
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cool !!!! keep writing !

Sonza SILVER said...
on Oct. 26 2012 at 4:21 am
Sonza SILVER, Bhubaneswar, Other
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Favorite Quote:
An apple a day, if well aimed, keeps the doctor away. - P. G. Wodehouse

yeah....i liked it!!  




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