I Love You

October 10, 2012
I love you. Your smile
Lights up my life. Your laughter
Is my lullaby

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Apr. 13, 2013 at 5:56 pm
short but beautiful <3 I love this. Amazing job!!! Even though it was shorter then most stuff I could definately feel the emotion.
The_Quiet_Girl replied...
Apr. 13, 2013 at 9:05 pm
Thank you! Sometimes, it's difficult to get my feelings across in a haiku because they are so short and restrictive. I have written some extended ones, but I couldn't figure out a way to continue this so that it flows smoothly and makes sense.
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