Don't Trust His Smile

Don't trust that smile
He's up to no good. He
Will shatter your heart

His motives are not
What they seem. He is just a
Player seeking fun

Don't fall for him, girl
Run while you can still escape
Spare yourself heartache

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3MOsleeping-beauty said...
Apr. 13, 2013 at 6:03 pm
this is amazing!! If only I had someone to warn me before some of the guys I fell for I would be way better off lol this is a great job as usual!!
The_Quiet_Girl replied...
Apr. 15, 2013 at 12:45 pm
Thank you! :) Even if I am warned, I usually ignore those warnings and regret it later lol
jettabugThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 3, 2012 at 9:49 pm
This is incredibly inspiring and well-written. It's hard to believe this was written by a teenager! Great job! Keep writing, and good luck on your future writing endeavors!
The_Quiet_Girl replied...
Nov. 5, 2012 at 10:16 am
Thank you!!!!! I truly appreciate your comment; I consider this to be one of my worst poems, so I wasn't expecting any feedback.
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