The Break Up

August 25, 2012
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Don’t leave me here for
My heart is slowly breaking.
My love - I miss you.

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liberalartist said...
Jun. 4, 2013 at 7:12 pm
i agree with jade, but it is still awesome
Jade.I.Am This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 4, 2013 at 5:30 pm
A little simplistic, I think if you write about breakups, especially in the limited form of a haiku, you need a really unique take/perspective on it. But it's still ok!
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