Good Feelin' Feet

July 12, 2012
By surrealnow GOLD, Omaha, Nebraska
surrealnow GOLD, Omaha, Nebraska
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brand new socks
cotton knitted perfectly
I'm walking on pillows



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on Jul. 19 2012 at 2:02 pm
surrealnow GOLD, Omaha, Nebraska
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that is for the most traditional haiku. contemporary haiku doesn't have to follow that syllabic order. it just has to be three lines and NO MORE than 17 syllables.

on Jul. 18 2012 at 10:25 am
Wearing_Westwood GOLD, Cary, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
Don't think. Thinking is the enemy of creativity. It's self conscious, and anything self-conscious is lousy. You can't try to do things. You simply must do things. -Ray Bradbury

five syllables first

then there are seven of them

five, seven, then five





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