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Wearing_Westwood said...
Jul. 18, 2012 at 10:25 am:

five syllables first

then there are seven of them

five, seven, then five

 
surrealnow replied...
Jul. 19, 2012 at 2:02 pm :
that is for the most traditional haiku. contemporary haiku doesn't have to follow that syllabic order. it just has to be three lines and NO MORE than 17 syllables.
 
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