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Origami Light Mobiles

Dancing, suspended
from the ceiling as a breeze
wafts through the window

Twirling, revealing
a metamorphosis of
shadows between light



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leafyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 22, 2013 at 9:15 am
I remember, before I discovered the wonders of writing, I would create all sorts of various origami creatures and objects. A lovely poem :)
 
leafyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jun. 10, 2013 at 11:52 pm
Sorry if I've asked you this already (I can't remember), but what is the URL to your blog again? I forgot what it was, and since I don't really get on TI anymore, I'd like a way to still see your work and perhaps talk sometime :)
 
IamtheshyStargirl replied...
Jun. 11, 2013 at 4:14 pm
Thanks for commenting Leafy! My brother's really into Origami :)
 
chrisfree.firebolts This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 15, 2012 at 10:46 am
I love it when poets capture so much in so few words! That  takes true talent. 
 
IamtheshyStargirl replied...
Oct. 17, 2012 at 5:31 pm
Diola lle, chrisfree :)
 
chrisfree.firebolts This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Oct. 18, 2012 at 8:23 am
Ahh, lle creoso, fellow Tolkienian. 
 
Aderes47 said...
Aug. 28, 2012 at 10:54 pm
This is really beautiful! :)
 
IamtheshyStargirl replied...
Oct. 17, 2012 at 5:30 pm
Thank you Aderes :)
 
MaeSilver said...
Aug. 8, 2012 at 1:58 pm
Loved it! Thanks for the post ^-^
 
IamtheshyStargirl replied...
Oct. 17, 2012 at 5:29 pm
Thanks :) and, you're welcome.
 
AriShine This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 2, 2012 at 3:03 pm
Wow! I really love the imagery in this! Great work, keep writing!
 
IamtheshyStargirl replied...
Aug. 3, 2012 at 10:33 am
Thank you very much, Arishine :D
 
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