Breathtaking

May 23, 2012
By Nicole67 PLATINUM, Indianola, Washington
Nicole67 PLATINUM, Indianola, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"Someday, someone will walk into your life and make you realize why it never worked out with anyone else."
"we often put up walls not to keep people out, but to see who cares to get through"
“Be who you are and say what you feel, because those who mind don't matter, and those who matter don't mind.”


Your fluorescent eyes
Remind me of a clear sky,
simply beautiful.


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on Jun. 2 2012 at 10:00 pm
Maddie_Rae PLATINUM, Newalla, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
I write my life in ink, that way i can still remember the good things, and yet i can never erase my mistakes.

I liked how you described his eyes as "flourecent"! great word description!


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