The End

  As a general comment on all of your haikus, you are able to express very powerful messages in a medium that can be so tricky to work with. You use your words sparingly, and I can tell that you put a lot of thought into each of them. The reason that I decided to comment on this one rather than the others is that it created such a vivid emotion for me. There are so many poems about heartbreak, but yours somehow still seems fresh and new. I admire the way you were able to make it feel so n... (more »)

you can say something so powerful  with so little!:)

This is wonderful. Every words seems to have been chosen for a specific purpose. No cristism, just praise! 

As they say, sometimes the simplest and clearest pieces of poetry are the strongest--Truly Great Job!!!!

There is such heartbreaking finality in this poem. Every word is perfect!

I love the simplicity of the dialogue but the complicated and emotional message it gives. Awesome poem!

verry intresting and i like it. i cant write haiku but i like reding it =) keep writing

i've noticed that you have spot on diction and this is just another piece that displays it