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Pictures which were once
memories , now lie around
unrecognized.



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SteelersJdog said...
Feb. 25, 2013 at 9:06 pm:
I really like this one. I'm pretty intruiged by the subjects of pictures in your poem. This holds such deep meaning. I'm very impressed :)
 
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JoPepperThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jun. 4, 2012 at 5:27 pm:
Very good job my only criticism is that "unrecognized" doesn't fit the poem structure, although it does end the poem nicely.
 
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mushgirl131 said...
May 19, 2012 at 12:31 pm:
i really like this! its short but is very powerful! 
 
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