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how do you dare
to cross a bleeding heart
have you no sole, dear

how do you dare
to break an open mind
have you no pride, love

do you how dare
"it's not my falt it was her"
you dare to point, why?




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LabitGurlThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 10, 2012 at 6:20 pm:
I think it is a good poem but you need to bring your ideas all together and other thank that it is good
 
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emptymotelsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 3, 2012 at 8:29 pm:

Hi,

I like this, the simplicity of the poem. It also has meaning to it, which I love. Great work.

 
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alex27This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 3, 2012 at 7:50 am:
looks instictive and straight from your heart. well done
 
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torilutz8 said...
May 1, 2012 at 10:05 am:
Simple and great idea, but make sure to spell check!!
 
maddyhatterThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
May 3, 2012 at 3:57 pm :
yah sort of did this in school one day real quick so there is alot of errors sorry
 
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torilutz8 said...
May 1, 2012 at 10:05 am:
Simple and great idea, but make sure to spell check!!
 
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DanielM. said...
Apr. 27, 2012 at 7:15 pm:
That was awesome poem. I admire your message. Great Job!!
 
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Wilson1994This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 27, 2012 at 7:10 pm:
Simplistically beautiful, I love it! :)
 
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katieRainbowsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 25, 2012 at 8:49 pm:

love it

 

 
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maddyhatterThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 24, 2012 at 5:07 pm:

did not relize my mistakes till after i posted this sorry :(

 

 
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