Swimmer's Reality

April 19, 2012
By amahzing_grace GOLD, Prattville, Alabama
amahzing_grace GOLD, Prattville, Alabama
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Favorite Quote:
I pay no attention whatever to anybody's praise or blame. I simply follow my own feelings.
-Wolfgang Amadeus Mozart


Water rushes by
Through my hair and around me
Reality fades



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on Nov. 6 2012 at 9:50 pm
TaylorWintry DIAMOND, Carrollton, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Never fear shadows. They simply mean there's a light shining somewhere nearby." - Unknown

I'm also a swimmer! (: That's what caught my eye. Despite the length of the poem, it captures everything you go through while swimming, and shows that it's not just playing around with goggles and splashes, it's really meaningful and worthwhile. Great job!

on Nov. 6 2012 at 9:50 pm
TaylorWintry DIAMOND, Carrollton, Texas
72 articles 0 photos 860 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never fear shadows. They simply mean there's a light shining somewhere nearby." - Unknown

I'm also a swimmer! (: That's what caught my eye. Despite the length of the poem, it captures everything you go through while swimming, and shows that it's not just playing around with goggles and splashes, it's really meaningful and worthwhile. Great job!

on Oct. 8 2012 at 11:47 am
Savannainthesky GOLD, West Suffield, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
"It may have been in pieces.. but I gave you the best of me"-Jim Morrison(the doors)

i really like this! i am a swimmer too :)


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