Report Abuse Home > Poetry > Haiku > Mourning Mourning By JoPepper, Annandale, VA More by this author even if you can’t be there right beside me…right? « Previous article More by this author Next article » Join the Discussion This article has 2 comments. Post your own! Report abuse Josika.Nav said... Jun. 4, 2012 at 2:58 am: hey! nice one. i do think that it can be a whole lot better, though ,if you replace one of the 'right's in the last line ,maybe with an 'aren't' or something like that. good job and keep writing :D JoPepper replied... Jun. 4, 2012 at 4:00 pm : Thanks for reading although I don't really get what you're saying.