April 18, 2012
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I can be happy
even if you can’t be there
right beside me…right?

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Josika.Nav said...
Jun. 4, 2012 at 2:58 am
hey! nice one. i do think that it can be a whole lot better, though ,if you replace one of the 'right's in the last line ,maybe with an 'aren't' or something like that. good job and keep writing :D
JoPepper replied...
Jun. 4, 2012 at 4:00 pm
Thanks for reading although I don't really get what you're saying.
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