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The world loomed above
I climbed to the highest point
And saw distant shores.





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Rhiannon16 said...
Jun. 12, 2012 at 9:44 am
I think I may be the only person that this didn't stump... I liked.
 
irratonal_Mr.irrational This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 15, 2012 at 4:45 pm
ehhhh.............
 
irratonal_Mr.irrational This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 15, 2012 at 4:45 pm
ehhhh.............
 
loveissmiles replied...
Apr. 19, 2012 at 7:16 am
Okay, this is different. It's not bad for it being the first attempt. The only thing i can't figure out is what was the image you wanted people to get from this, because it was really vague to me. Good job for the first try tho.
 
AgentOrange789 replied...
Apr. 19, 2012 at 9:44 pm

This was a tribute to Lord of the Rings...I was sort of trying to convey how the character is faced with a task of essentially rising over a world that daunts him (being a hobbit). Once he gets there, he can never go back, and can only look onward towards the "distant shores" (the gray havens). 

Thank you for your feedback, though. I appreciate it, and it gave me a lot to think about. 

 
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