Report Abuse Home > Poetry > Haiku > masked masked By dragonfly95, argaon, GA More by this author We hide behind our masks So, no one sees us laugh, Or cry when were lonely. « Previous article More by this author Next article » Join the Discussion This article has 3 comments. Post your own! Report abuse IAmWhoIWantToBe said... May 3, 2012 at 1:03 am: First, I think this is more of a freeverse poem than a haiku. A haiku has 5-7-5 syllables in each line. Second, were in the third line must have been we're.were - past tesnse of arewe're - we areThird, although, I think masks have been used in so many literature pieces when they're talking of hiding their true feelings or something like that. Maybe, you could revise it.Other than those, I think you'll just need a little work so this could b... (more ») Report abuse BucketFiller said... Apr. 23, 2012 at 7:24 pm: I like it, concise, to the point and totally true! Nice one :) Report abuse Lindsey31 said... Apr. 2, 2012 at 9:52 pm: I think you have a lot to go on in this piece, but if it had a little more length and depth, it would be mind-blowing. A paragraph or two goes a long way. You've got the backbone to an amazing piece ~ now it's time to make it shine.