Summer day

March 29, 2012
By hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii BRONZE, New York, New York
hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii BRONZE, New York, New York
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floating in the sky
surrounded by the white clouds
the orange aura

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on Apr. 1 2012 at 2:12 pm
DaisyAngel BRONZE, Sandy Springs, Georgia
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Do you know what's ironic? I just finished posting a comment on a haiku about winter. :P This was great! I liked the imagery that you used. I can clearly imagine what you are wanting me to. The only thing that would make this better is if you were to add capitalization in the proper areas. However, that tends to go out the window in most poems anyway, so it's not a big deal. :) Would you consider commenting on my poem "In a Room of Children"? I would really appreciate it!


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