La Primavera

March 20, 2012
By beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.
--Eleanor Roosevelt


The frost has left and
a fresh feel of warmth remains--
the world is reborn.

I lay in the grass,
woken by a golden sun
seeing Her at work.

Trees bear new blossoms,
animals shyly come out--
again She has come.

Birds hit their high notes,
a breeze tousles my loose hair--
the sky a bright blue.

Spring exhales deeply--
a flowery scent surrounds,
putting me at ease.


The author's comments:
It's the first day of Spring!!

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dinks PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 18 2013 at 8:32 pm
dinks PLATINUM, Hinsdale, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"and kisses are a better faith than freedom"

The title intrested me, and overall the poem was great! I like the collection of Haikus to create a larger picture, check outmy work if you have the chance!

Mckay ELITE said...
on Mar. 14 2013 at 5:47 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do."
—Apple’s “Think Different” commercial, 1997
“Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn't understood.”
― Weihui Zhou

I love the imagery—the sight, the sound, I can see and hear it all. I love the title too. It's not a boring title like "The Spring".

so_joy SILVER said...
on Nov. 14 2012 at 4:41 pm
so_joy SILVER, Navesink, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"Be the change you want to see."

Wow! This is really nice! I liked it very much. It made me smile. Spring cannot come soon enough! Please read, rate, and comment on my poems! It would mean a lot.  

on Jun. 3 2012 at 11:22 am
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.
--Eleanor Roosevelt

Thanks for commenting~

on Jun. 3 2012 at 10:50 am
pandagirl312 GOLD, Leawood, Kansas
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Really nice... I especially love the Spanish title!

on Apr. 8 2012 at 4:46 pm
snowleopard100 PLATINUM, New York City, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Two roads diverged in a yellow wood, but I took the one less traveled by, and that has made all the difference."

No, I forgot! I just joined so I had just submitted some work.

on Apr. 8 2012 at 4:19 pm
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.
--Eleanor Roosevelt

Thanks! I was thinking that others would get tired of my nature poems. By the way, I was looking for your work, but has it been approved yet?

on Apr. 8 2012 at 4:10 pm
snowleopard100 PLATINUM, New York City, New York
33 articles 1 photo 80 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Two roads diverged in a yellow wood, but I took the one less traveled by, and that has made all the difference."

Beautiful personification. There are so many cliche'd nature poems out there, and you have done an exquisite job of keeping yours fresh and original.

on Apr. 8 2012 at 6:18 am
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.
--Eleanor Roosevelt

Thanks! I just love springtime~

Kiyoko GOLD said...
on Apr. 8 2012 at 1:21 am
Kiyoko GOLD, Knoxville, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
Independence is my happiness, I view things as they are without regard to place or person. My country is the world, and my religion is to do good. - Thomas Paine

I like the idea of spring exhaling - i think that's a great use of words! Very strong ending to a good poem!

on Apr. 2 2012 at 6:37 pm
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.
--Eleanor Roosevelt

I don't know. I've always liked other languages---you'll notice that my "Hanakotoba" and "Hitomebore" are Japanese words. Anyways, I looked on the site and there were a lot of poems called "Spring." I just wanted to be different.

on Apr. 2 2012 at 6:33 pm
Behind_a_Plastic_Smile GOLD, Roseville, California
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Favorite Quote:
"if you're not 1st you're last"

Ya the no prob. I have a question though: why did you title it in Spanish instead of just calling it Spring?

on Apr. 2 2012 at 6:15 pm
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
35 articles 0 photos 1401 comments

Favorite Quote:
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.
--Eleanor Roosevelt

Thanks for commenting~ That was fast!

on Apr. 2 2012 at 6:13 pm
Behind_a_Plastic_Smile GOLD, Roseville, California
17 articles 1 photo 129 comments

Favorite Quote:
"if you're not 1st you're last"

this is really beautiful. i love your presonification and way with words. the imagery that comes with is lovely.

on Apr. 1 2012 at 5:01 pm
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
35 articles 0 photos 1401 comments

Favorite Quote:
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.
--Eleanor Roosevelt

Thank you for your comment~

on Apr. 1 2012 at 4:56 pm
eternal_sunshine SILVER, Minnetonka, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
Laugh, and the world laughs with you;
Weep, and you weep alone.
For the sad old earth must borrow it's mirth,
But has trouble enough of its own.

I love this vivid, yet simple description. It really made me want spring. I liked how the whole poem seemed to be building towards the end, "putting me at ease."

 Nice job :)


on Mar. 25 2012 at 8:58 am
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
35 articles 0 photos 1401 comments

Favorite Quote:
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.
--Eleanor Roosevelt

Thanks~ You're the first to comment!

KateLA GOLD said...
on Mar. 24 2012 at 8:32 pm
KateLA GOLD, Everett, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
Don’t you find it Funny that after Monday(M) and Tuesday(T), the rest of the week says WTF?
-Unknown

This is really good, it puts you right in the moments it's capturing, I love it!


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