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La Primavera
March 20, 2012
The frost has left and
a fresh feel of warmth remains--
the world is reborn.
I lay in the grass,
woken by a golden sun
seeing Her at work.
Trees bear new blossoms,
animals shyly come out--
again She has come.
Birds hit their high notes,
a breeze tousles my loose hair--
the sky a bright blue.
Spring exhales deeply--
a flowery scent surrounds,
putting me at ease.
© Carlie C.
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This article has 18 comments.
beautifulspirit PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 3 2012 at 11:22 am
Thanks for commenting~
pandagirl312 GOLD said...
on Jun. 3 2012 at 10:50 am
Really nice... I especially love the Spanish title!
snowleopard100 PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 8 2012 at 4:46 pm
No, I forgot! I just joined so I had just submitted some work.
beautifulspirit PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 8 2012 at 4:19 pm
Thanks! I was thinking that others would get tired of my nature poems. By the way, I was looking for your work, but has it been approved yet?
snowleopard100 PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 8 2012 at 4:10 pm
Beautiful personification. There are so many cliche'd nature poems out there, and you have done an exquisite job of keeping yours fresh and original.
beautifulspirit PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 8 2012 at 6:18 am
Thanks! I just love springtime~
beautifulspirit PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 2 2012 at 6:37 pm
I don't know. I've always liked other languages---you'll notice that my "Hanakotoba" and "Hitomebore" are Japanese words. Anyways, I looked on the site and there were a lot of poems called "Spring." I just wanted to be different.
Behind_a_Plastic_Smile GOLD said...
on Apr. 2 2012 at 6:33 pm
Ya the no prob. I have a question though: why did you title it in Spanish instead of just calling it Spring?
beautifulspirit PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 2 2012 at 6:15 pm
Thanks for commenting~ That was fast!
Behind_a_Plastic_Smile GOLD said...
on Apr. 2 2012 at 6:13 pm
this is really beautiful. i love your presonification and way with words. the imagery that comes with is lovely.
beautifulspirit PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 1 2012 at 5:01 pm
Thank you for your comment~
eternal_sunshine SILVER said...
on Apr. 1 2012 at 4:56 pm
I love this vivid, yet simple description. It really made me want spring. I liked how the whole poem seemed to be building towards the end, "putting me at ease."
Nice job :)
beautifulspirit PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 25 2012 at 8:58 am
Thanks~ You're the first to comment!
