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Art of the Muses

Made to enrich lives,
A harmony of both spheres
pure delight to ears.

Evoke emotions---
an art form as old as time,
---through sound and silence.



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bearsfan654 said...
Apr. 18, 2012 at 10:40 pm:
This is a great haiku! It is very wise and powerful! 
 
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Apr. 19, 2012 at 6:11 am :
Thank you!
 
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LaceeJade This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 18, 2012 at 5:32 pm:
Wow, this is inspirational. Thank you!
 
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Apr. 18, 2012 at 5:33 pm :
You're welcome~ Thank you for reading it!
 
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maddyhatter said...
Apr. 17, 2012 at 12:08 pm:

that was the best haiku i've read in a long time good job :)

 

 
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Apr. 17, 2012 at 3:52 pm :
Thank you! It was my pleasure:)
 
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snowleopard100 said...
Apr. 14, 2012 at 1:17 pm:
What an amazing ending!!!! To have a haiku with such a powerful message is very rare so spectacular job!!!!
 
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Apr. 14, 2012 at 1:18 pm :
Thanks for commenting!!!!
 
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gb12197 said...
Apr. 14, 2012 at 12:36 pm:
i really like this. you found such a great waay to desribe music in such few words, which is not easy ro do. it is a really beautiful poem, and it was so easy to understand and find the meaning in it. greaat job :)
 
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Apr. 14, 2012 at 1:14 pm :
Great! I'm glad you liked it and understood its meaning. Some have told me that the poem is ambiguous, which I like---it adds to the mystery, but still I like that someone understood it first.
 
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JoPepperThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 8, 2012 at 12:18 pm:
lol when I read as old as time I started to think of Beauty and the Beast (you know, the song) and I loved the last line! Great job, Keep writing!!!
 
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Apr. 8, 2012 at 12:27 pm :
Thanks for commenting, and I was thinking the same thing when I wrote the line: "as old as time."
 
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Apr. 13, 2012 at 9:00 pm :
I love that movie and you're welcome, ever need some feedback just ask!
 
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J-Nav said...
Apr. 2, 2012 at 1:00 am:
hey!
it is remarkably beautiful for a poem a so short. i like the lines 'through sound and silence'. great work and keep writing!!:)
 
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Apr. 2, 2012 at 5:26 am :
Thanks for commenting~
 
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AgentOrange789 said...
Apr. 1, 2012 at 10:41 pm:
Wow. I'm really impressed by how much can be expressed in a few words. It normally takes me a lot to write out something so complex. Well done. 
 
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Apr. 2, 2012 at 5:25 am :
Thanks for your feedback~
 
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SpringRayynThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 31, 2012 at 10:08 am:
Oh, I do like the last part, "through sound and silence." It's very true. And it sounds pretty too. I like it!
 
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Mar. 31, 2012 at 10:14 am :
Thanks~ I thought it was a great way to describe music.
 
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Ariya said...
Mar. 26, 2012 at 7:33 pm:
It's sweet, simple and meaningful everything that haiku should be.  
 
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Mar. 26, 2012 at 7:35 pm :
Cool thanks~
 
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