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The touch of our hands
Means everything to me
If only he knew...




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Silver2blackThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 12, 2012 at 10:37 am:
I love it, Is it me or does the second line only sound like 6 syllables ? Love it very good, Awesomeness Talent !
 
SeizeTheDay replied...
Feb. 12, 2012 at 10:41 am :
Thank you so much!! (: When I wrote it I was thinking ev/er/y/thing - it's not the natural way of saying it, but it fits. (:
 
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Shmelmo said...
Jan. 30, 2012 at 7:27 pm:
Short and Sweet. I really can't write Haikus but you did a really nice job! Could you check out my poem - Once a Survivor, Forever a Fighter?
 
scenesoccerqueen replied...
Feb. 1, 2012 at 2:23 pm :
Short sweet and to the point...very good. I feel the emotion that went into this..awesome!
 
SeizeTheDay replied...
Feb. 1, 2012 at 8:31 pm :
Thank you so much! Haikus are amazing in the sense that they are so powerful in such few words. (:
 
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OfMuchHappiness said...
Jan. 29, 2012 at 12:51 pm:
[First of all, I like your username, it's cute. (:] Second, I love this poem so much. I am soooo bad at haikus, they're always such a challenge to make them sound good and not choppy. But I believe that someone just proved it's possible! This is great, keep it up!
 
SeizeTheDay replied...
Feb. 2, 2012 at 8:35 am :
Thanks so much, haikus are so amazing, and fun to write. (:
 
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AshleaEnchanted said...
Jan. 15, 2012 at 9:03 am:
Aww thats so cute! :D
 
SeizeTheDay replied...
Jan. 15, 2012 at 10:51 am :
Thank you!! :D
 
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song-writer26 said...
Jan. 14, 2012 at 1:56 pm:
Ah!So beautiful yet so simple :*).AHHH I LOOOOVE IT!;D :3
 
SeizeTheDay replied...
Jan. 15, 2012 at 10:51 am :
Thanks so much! :D
 
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SeizeTheDay said...
Jan. 13, 2012 at 6:49 pm:
Thank you so much!! :D That's what I was trying to go for. Will do :)
 
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Sarakins said...
Jan. 9, 2012 at 8:54 pm:
That's cute and sad at the same time. Keep up the good work!!
 
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JaneCapelleThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 9, 2012 at 2:52 pm:
aww...this is sad and sweet at the same time...i like it though, so 5/5 =)
 
SeizeTheDay replied...
Jan. 9, 2012 at 8:44 pm :
Thank you so much! (: That's what I was going for, and your comment means so much to me. :D
 
JaneCapelleThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Feb. 2, 2012 at 6:05 pm :
lol i was about to comment again...but then i was like, "wait, this poem sounds familiar..did i comment before?" and as it turns out i did...hehe...oh well...but the thing is...now i like it even more! :D 5/5 (again :P)
 
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cookiestar said...
Jan. 8, 2012 at 7:30 am:
This is simple and sweet, yet powerful:)
 
SeizeTheDay replied...
Jan. 9, 2012 at 8:44 pm :
Thank you!! :D
 
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readerwriter85 said...
Jan. 7, 2012 at 7:36 pm:
This is so telling in so few words. Very simple and powerful and so ridiculously true.
 
SeizeTheDay replied...
Jan. 9, 2012 at 8:45 pm :
That's why I LOOOOVE haiku poetry. Short, sweet, and to the point.. But yet so beautiful. Thanks (:
 
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