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Hope you're watching as
I write poems for you, fingers
tapping syllables

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.




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Kimberlywrites said...
Jan. 21, 2012 at 3:58 pm:
This is so beautiful. It makes me want to attempt learning the art of the haiku.
 
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Tremendous said...
Jan. 2, 2012 at 10:12 am:
you mastered the haiku! you were able to take such a short passage and express so much feeling, also introducing us to a story. Good job, keep it up! Please consider checking out my work.
 
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eliana924 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 1, 2012 at 12:25 pm:
I really love the way you utilized every single precious syllable of a haiku for maximum impact; there's so much of an implicit story behind the limited words.
 
Birdsong This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jan. 1, 2012 at 4:58 pm :
Thank you so much!
 
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