It's Me MAG

December 29, 2011
By Birdsong PLATINUM, Vancouver, Other
Birdsong PLATINUM, Vancouver, Other
38 articles 1 photo 7 comments

Hope you're watching as
I write poems for you, fingers
tapping syllables



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on Jan. 21 2012 at 3:58 pm
Kimberlywrites BRONZE, Waikoloa, Hawaii
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Favorite Quote:
For we have not been given a spirit of fear but of power and of love and of a sound mind.

II Timothy 1:7

This is so beautiful. It makes me want to attempt learning the art of the haiku.

Tremendous said...
on Jan. 2 2012 at 10:12 am
you mastered the haiku! you were able to take such a short passage and express so much feeling, also introducing us to a story. Good job, keep it up! Please consider checking out my work.

on Jan. 1 2012 at 4:58 pm
Birdsong PLATINUM, Vancouver, Other
38 articles 1 photo 7 comments
Thank you so much!

eliana924 GOLD said...
on Jan. 1 2012 at 12:25 pm
eliana924 GOLD, New York, New York
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I really love the way you utilized every single precious syllable of a haiku for maximum impact; there's so much of an implicit story behind the limited words.


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