It's Me

This is so beautiful. It makes me want to attempt learning the art of the haiku.

you mastered the haiku! you were able to take such a short passage and express so much feeling, also introducing us to a story. Good job, keep it up! Please consider checking out my work.

I really love the way you utilized every single precious syllable of a haiku for maximum impact; there's so much of an implicit story behind the limited words.