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November 20, 2011
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The weather turns crisp
and trees resemble pastels.
Farewell, old summer.





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torilutz8 said...
Apr. 5, 2012 at 11:03 am
Takes a lot of talent to capture such emotion in 17 syllables. Good job :)
 
ebj.2014 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Apr. 8, 2012 at 2:16 am
Thank you!! Haha it was definitely hard to fit everything I wanted to say into 17 syllables! 
 
PrincessBubblegum said...
Nov. 28, 2011 at 10:33 pm
I love fall so much and you have managed to capture it beautifully in these three lines. 
 
Writerforlife7423 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Nov. 30, 2011 at 10:36 pm
Thanks!! I agree, Fall is the most beautiful time of the year, no question. 
 
Ender2 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 28, 2011 at 9:29 pm
I love it, you pretty much captured fall in those short lines. I truly adore your work- keep writing! :)
 
Writerforlife7423 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Nov. 30, 2011 at 10:36 pm
Thank you so much!! That made my day. I would love to check out some of your writing! :)
 
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