A Rock, A Feather

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Her husband, a rock.
Herself, a fragile human.
Together, complete.

He spins her around,
expressing how much he cares.
Never letting go.

She runs for his arms,
as they wrap around her frame.
He will hold on tight.

She is a feather,
easily caught in the wind,
that lands on a rock.





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pinkowl said...
Dec. 1, 2011 at 6:26 pm
i LOVE the art of this poem, how you are all symbolic! great job!  (:
 
RebeccaJoy This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Dec. 1, 2011 at 6:50 pm
thanks so much! :D
 
KylaK said...
Dec. 1, 2011 at 6:15 pm
This is so cute, and I love the symbolism!
 
RebeccaJoy This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Dec. 1, 2011 at 6:50 pm
thanks so much. if you knew my sister and her hubby then you would understand why i chose the rock and feather.
 
mbrown106 said...
Nov. 30, 2011 at 6:03 pm
Very sweet :)
 
RebeccaJoy This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Dec. 1, 2011 at 7:23 am

Thanks, its about my sister and her husband. I have a lot of stuff about them on here

 

 
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