Pretty Water

October 31, 2011
By Aaron Tanvir BRONZE, Pearland, Texas
Aaron Tanvir BRONZE, Pearland, Texas
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Beautiful water,
Dancing in the juicy rain,
Slapping the dirt ground.


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on Nov. 16 2011 at 8:09 pm
WickedStarcatcher DIAMOND, Massapequa, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"I don't damsel well. Distress, I can do. Damseling? Not so much."
— James Patterson
"This is the very first page, not where the storyline ends, my thoughts will echo your name until I see you again..." ~Taylor Swift "Enchanted"

I like the descriptive language! It allows the reader to visualize the scene :)


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