On my mind.

August 29, 2011
By HeartMindSoul GOLD, Port Aransas, Texas
HeartMindSoul GOLD, Port Aransas, Texas
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You: ice on my mind,
Void opens within my chest,
Swallowing my heart.


The author's comments:
Um... Lame haiku. Sorry.

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on Sep. 8 2011 at 5:38 pm
HeartMindSoul GOLD, Port Aransas, Texas
11 articles 53 photos 27 comments
Thanks a lot! It's great to get feedback from others. It's greatly appreciated.

on Sep. 8 2011 at 2:44 pm
writingchick GOLD, Huntington, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
"Faith is taking another step without seeing the entire staircase."

I personally don't think the haiku is lame! I like it (:




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