On my mind.

August 29, 2011
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You: ice on my mind,
Void opens within my chest,
Swallowing my heart.

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writingchick This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 8, 2011 at 2:44 pm
I personally don't think the haiku is lame! I like it (:
HeartMindSoul replied...
Sept. 8, 2011 at 5:38 pm
Thanks a lot! It's great to get feedback from others. It's greatly appreciated.
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