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Well, you never wore
short skirts like that before, so
I guess we're even.




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ArchimedesWhiteThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Sept. 1, 2011 at 10:44 am:

That Haiku is great!

I applaud your artistry.

Refrigerator...

 
Harebelle This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Sept. 1, 2011 at 12:57 pm :
Thanks! But...uh...refrigerator?
 
ArchimedesWhiteThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Sept. 2, 2011 at 7:00 am :
I made a Haiku before, and refrigerator is a funny way of ending the poem...
 
Harebelle This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Sept. 4, 2011 at 12:23 pm :
Oh! I get it. Wow...I applaud your artistry too!
 
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FreedomIsMyVirtue said...
Aug. 26, 2011 at 7:13 pm:
I like this haiku. Short but all the more complete just like the others. But this pretty much stands out!
 
Harebelle This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 28, 2011 at 12:43 am :
Thank you so much! Your comment really means a lot to me.
 
FreedomIsMyVirtue replied...
Aug. 28, 2011 at 6:49 am :
You're welcome. I also like how you compare girls who wear short skirts to pot and kettle. It's a very good metaphor and so original!!!
 
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