Every Single Lie

June 8, 2011
By kaykaybeck PLATINUM, Petersburg, Michigan
kaykaybeck PLATINUM, Petersburg, Michigan
24 articles 4 photos 80 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life takes you somewhere, love helps you get there.


Remember the time you told me you loved me?
Well now someone else is calling you baby
I gave you my trust
But now I just can’t adjust
To everything that’s happened with you
Because now all we do is argue
Every single lie you told
And I see your heart is cold
My heart is left in pieces
I’ve given you too many chances
I’m about to let go
But my heart takes another blow
I decide to take action
And fly into heaven


The author's comments:
I wrote this piece from my own expierence I would like to get feedback so please comment! (:

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on Jan. 9 2012 at 12:28 pm
kaykaybeck PLATINUM, Petersburg, Michigan
24 articles 4 photos 80 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life takes you somewhere, love helps you get there.

Thank you so so much.

Ranea GOLD said...
on Jan. 7 2012 at 11:24 pm
Ranea GOLD, Elkhart, Indiana
18 articles 0 photos 50 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It can always be worse, so put on a happy face and laugh!" (my own quote) &
"Sticks and stones may break my bones, but words may scar my soul."

this is a really good poem. and i know exactly what you mean cause my exbf and the other males of my life were/are the same and made me want to end my life which has inspired a lot of my work. by usin such a tender experience i think you did wickedly wicked (amazingly awesome)


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