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Smudged Footprints

Victim of man’s rape,
nature is sobbing again;
fresh dew on the ground.



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Lexie96 said...
Nov. 6, 2011 at 10:00 am

I love this... normally I'm not one for haikus, but this is really good! You just might have turned me into a believer :)

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TheOnlySpecialK said...
Sept. 3, 2011 at 9:49 am
Very powerful and full of emotion.
 
IamtheshyStargirl said...
Aug. 29, 2011 at 5:27 pm
Harsh, painful, and full of emotion. Haikus are supposed to do that, convey emotion, you know. 
 
redhairCat This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 22, 2011 at 4:46 pm
I agree. Very short and powerful (and sad).
 
Lola_Black said...
Aug. 20, 2011 at 1:24 pm
Okay, I'm in love with this! Short and powerful; the best way a poem can be! ♦Five Stars♦
 
dia.dreamer replied...
Aug. 20, 2011 at 2:09 pm
thanks, Lola_Black. :D I've read your work...you're awesome at writing!
 
Lola_Black replied...
Aug. 20, 2011 at 8:18 pm
Really? Thanks!
 
Harebelle This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 16, 2011 at 4:13 pm
I would never have thought to describe a plant like that! This is amazing, especially since it's so short...keep writing!
 
dia.dreamer replied...
Aug. 19, 2011 at 12:13 am
thanks.. :) I checked out your poems.....they're really nice..!! you too keep writing. :D
 
dia.dreamer replied...
Aug. 19, 2011 at 12:14 am
I mean your poem and your story...you just recently joined, right?
 
Harebelle This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 19, 2011 at 10:56 am
Yeah I did...but thanks for your comment, it's really encouraging!
 
dia.dreamer replied...
Aug. 20, 2011 at 12:02 am
:D thanks for your comments too! can't wait to read more of your work...!
 
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