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Fall Day

Hilly fields of grain
Outlined by rainbow leaves
On half-naked trees




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CarrieAnn13This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 1, 2011 at 5:06 pm:
Again, you seemed to have used only six syllables in the second line rather than seven.
 
MissColleen replied...
Aug. 1, 2011 at 11:03 pm :
Whoops, I missed a word. The second line should read: Outlined by the rainbow leaves
 
CarrieAnn13This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Aug. 1, 2011 at 11:51 pm :
Oh, that makes sense now!
 
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