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Fall Day

Hilly fields of grain
Outlined by rainbow leaves
On half-naked trees



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CarrieAnn13 said...
Aug. 1, 2011 at 5:06 pm
Again, you seemed to have used only six syllables in the second line rather than seven.
 
MissColleen replied...
Aug. 1, 2011 at 11:03 pm
Whoops, I missed a word. The second line should read: Outlined by the rainbow leaves
 
CarrieAnn13 replied...
Aug. 1, 2011 at 11:51 pm
Oh, that makes sense now!
 
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