Report Abuse Home > Poetry > Haiku > Fall Day Fall Day By MissColleen, Lebanon, PA More by this author Outlined by rainbow leaves On half-naked trees « Previous article More by this author Next article » October & November Join the Discussion This article has 3 comments. Post your own! Report abuse CarrieAnn13 said... Aug. 1, 2011 at 5:06 pm: Again, you seemed to have used only six syllables in the second line rather than seven. MissColleen replied... Aug. 1, 2011 at 11:03 pm : Whoops, I missed a word. The second line should read: Outlined by the rainbow leaves CarrieAnn13 replied... Aug. 1, 2011 at 11:51 pm : Oh, that makes sense now!