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See, and you'll see a

haiku. Wish to see, and you

will see a meaning.



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billgamesh11 said...
Aug. 27, 2011 at 10:22 am
Wow That should be the Webster definition of a haiku!!!:):):);)
 
ritabelle511 said...
Aug. 15, 2011 at 10:21 pm
Even though its short (duh, its haiku!), it's got an interesting/clever message. :)  Great job!
 
redhairCat This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 31, 2011 at 5:10 pm
I don't understand it, but that might just be me!
 
Alon_Freevoice said...
Jul. 30, 2011 at 8:26 pm
Good job though kind of repetitive :)))
 
JoPepper said...
Jul. 30, 2011 at 4:24 pm
I really like this and I love the meaning!!!!!!!!!!! :D
 
HopelessOctopus said...
Jul. 30, 2011 at 3:51 pm
I really love this ;)
 
BrightBurningCampeadorThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 30, 2011 at 2:37 pm
One of the rare haikus I like. And this one I love.
 
ohheyyyelli said...
Jul. 30, 2011 at 12:49 pm
I love this!!!!! You don't even know how amazing this is. Really original too.
 
Jesusfreak78 said...
Jul. 30, 2011 at 12:21 pm
This is awesome! I don't even know how to give any contructive critcism for this on lol
 
akrreid said...
Jul. 30, 2011 at 11:28 am
I really like this haiku! It's very interesting and intriguing.
 
flawless200 said...
Jul. 30, 2011 at 11:25 am
sweet simple and genuinly informative I love this piece you should keep writing!=)
 
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