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I act so mature
Playing with my mother's hair
Making her feel young

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.




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dia.dreamer said...
Aug. 24, 2011 at 7:37 am:
aw, this is so sweet and touching, and somehow still short. keep writing. :)
 
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.Izzy.This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 22, 2011 at 10:22 am:
Short, simple, but very meaningful. Good job!
 
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Raytheraym said...
Jul. 21, 2011 at 4:26 pm:
I like it. It's simple, yet deep.
 
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Alon_Freevoice said...
Jul. 21, 2011 at 5:05 am:
I don't think mature and playing go along together. This is a good haiku anyway. If only I'm so sweet to a mother...
 
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