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I guard a dead heart
That is the only sad part
For the rest is numb




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ohheyyyelli said...
Jul. 19, 2011 at 1:11 pm:
You have a really nice writing style[:
 
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Delictious said...
Jul. 13, 2011 at 5:55 pm:
I really like it... Short, simple, and makes you think!(:
 
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Sara G. said...
Jul. 12, 2011 at 8:25 am:
I love this. You did a great job conveying the emotion in just a few words.
 
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Alon_Freevoice said...
Jul. 12, 2011 at 5:01 am:

This is good and I can raelly relate to it...

Keep writing... :)))

 
CieraDesiree replied...
Jul. 12, 2011 at 1:18 pm :
Thanks guys=)
 
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