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Electron Hearts

It electrifies
Positive and negative
Electron hearts meet



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Lexie96 said...
Nov. 3, 2011 at 9:06 pm:

This is so pretty, short and sweet!

Think you could check out my work sometime?

 
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StrangeJadeThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 18, 2011 at 6:55 pm:
Short, sweet, and to the point. And pretty, too. :)
 
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kat2.0 said...
Jul. 17, 2011 at 12:15 pm:
It's short yet so meaningful
 
emanmkhan replied...
Jul. 17, 2011 at 12:42 pm :
Why thank you! I'm glad you liked it :)
 
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HaleyDRog. said...
Jul. 16, 2011 at 6:49 pm:
I really liked this haiku. I've never read one this impressive!
 
emanmkhan replied...
Jul. 17, 2011 at 12:43 pm :
Thanks so much!!! :D
 
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NinjaGirl This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 14, 2011 at 3:11 pm:
I like the way you turned science into love. Great concept. I myself am a fan of using something to describe something totally different!
 
emanmkhan replied...
Jul. 14, 2011 at 7:53 pm :
Thanks. It's great to put opposite concepts together...
 
sakina replied...
Jul. 15, 2011 at 4:05 am :
A very creative way of writing... just loved it...:)Hmmm do you mind checking out my stuff..:)
 
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